The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/08
Now, I was never a Seinfeld fan (only watched it a couple times here and there), but you seem to have the characters pretty well nailed, from what I know.
It may have been because I am not a fan of the show, but I wasn't really engaged in this. Maybe a bit more action (or is that counter to the whole Seinfeld thing? hehe)? I wasn't bored, mind you, but just not engrossed.
Still a cute read, and a fun little point.
08/24/08
Your idea with this is very creative. I did enjoy the "story within a story" (the superman incident within the Seinfeld episode.) I agree that the lines you've given Jerry and George seem to be exactly what they would say. (Sorry, I haven't watched the show much though, either.) :)
08/25/08
This is so dead on for the kind of "arguement" Jerry and George always had. I have to agree with George on this one...it always bugged me that no one could recognize Superman as Clark (forehead slap). Very cute...
08/25/08
Very creative and very spot on for the portrayal of George and Jerry. Unique. A very original take on the topic. Blessings, Cheri
Now this is creative. Great job of writing lines for these two characters. I could hear both of them loud and clear!
You got the dialogue for Jerry and George just right. I never quite understood Superman's "quick change" myself.
You have to be a Seinfeld fan. You've got George and Jerry *down*. Very entertaining read.
08/26/08
Very clever entry. I like the idea of fictional characters (from TV) discussing the fictional aspects of a movie. Great job.
I found it, yay! This is totally right on, and gave me a good chuckle. Would have loved to have seen this on one of their shows.

I too am among the ranks of being slightly irritated that nobody every recognized Clark.:) My husband and I watch re-runs EVERY night.