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08/21/08
WOW-zer. Goosebumps. okay, wow. No soul payment from me, sorry. Well done!
08/21/08
Superb allegory!
08/22/08
Nicely done! Very enticing.
Ah, yes.... it all depends on one's perspective, doesn't it? I'm glad you let your MC at least recognize something wrong, just hope it was soon enough... Good story. :)
08/25/08
I love all of the "subtle" allusions to her true destination. What sales pitch! I was clued at the beginning in by his name plate, which made it very fun for me to read. Nice done!!
Great way to show the deception of the enemy of our soul and the way in which he convinces us his way is the best way.
08/27/08
Wonderful entry. Very chilling to read. Excellent descriptions. You really made hades sound so tempting. Superb job with the topic.
09/01/08
Wow, great take on the topic! Well done!

Oh...I just got it...D. Monique = demonic! Ok,so I'm slow...

Great job.