The Official Writing Challenge
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This has the feel of a true fantasy, and it will really appeal to lovers of that genre.

I'm not really clear on if it's our world, or some other world with our Savior. Either way is somewhat problematical.

This would be a good discussion-starter for teens, who really enjoy writing of this type.
A teenager looking for and trying to understand his own faith is ageless. Good job.