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08/21/08
Oh, this brings to mind certain very famous people who shall remain nameless...

Well done!
08/21/08
The sad thing is that so many people are deceived, and then irrevocably damaged when the truth comes out. Very good story.
08/22/08
Very good job of "unmasking" the deception through the eyes of a "fooled one." I was definitely engrossed in the tale (and the deception!)
08/22/08
Great work on this all-too-real sad story. I wish it wasn't true, but I think this charade has been played out many times. This is perfect for the topic.
Perfectly on target piece for charades. I knew what was coming yet I felt sympathy for the mc all the way through. Good job!
You did a great job of showing Satan as deceiver and how even good people can be taken in by the charade of hypocritical preachers. Good job.