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Oh, this brings to mind certain very famous people who shall remain nameless...

Well done!
The sad thing is that so many people are deceived, and then irrevocably damaged when the truth comes out. Very good story.
Very good job of "unmasking" the deception through the eyes of a "fooled one." I was definitely engrossed in the tale (and the deception!)
Great work on this all-too-real sad story. I wish it wasn't true, but I think this charade has been played out many times. This is perfect for the topic.
Perfectly on target piece for charades. I knew what was coming yet I felt sympathy for the mc all the way through. Good job!
You did a great job of showing Satan as deceiver and how even good people can be taken in by the charade of hypocritical preachers. Good job.