The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
I had to think, too, for several minutes, about the espionage aspects of this, to fully figure out what was happening. I really love the unique approach you took to this topic, and wish there were twice as many words to fully develop the plot! Very compelling...I couldn't stop reading.
08/22/08
Very interesting entry and very timely, of course. Good job!
Intricately woven plot. Good descriptions and details of setting. Unique slant on topic. :)
08/25/08
I really really really wish there was more of this, because I'm not clear on what happened. I couldn't tear my eyes away tho, it was so good, intriguing, and compelling. (So THAT's why Beijing looked so good on TV. ;) ) Very creative.
I was fascinated by the intrigue and unique approach to the topic. Excellent!
08/27/08
Oh wow... now I will be watching with a new twist on everything. You sure raised my conspiracy radar!LOL. Amazing creativity!
This is very well written; the events mentioned make it quite believable. I'd like to read more.
I'm not clear on what happened either... but I love your take on the topic. Very well written.
08/27/08
You've brought to life so many of the things I was wondering about while watching the Olympics… the pollution, the genocide, and the poverty. This is beyond creative… I think I have it figured out… but wouldn't mind a sequel :) to fill in details. Amazing writing!