The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Oh, I had to read this twice to catch why Mabel was mad. I'm sure others will get it quicker than I did:) Good job. Love the story!
08/22/08
Mabel learned a lesson in jumping to conclusions, didn't she? Funny!
08/25/08
I giggle each time I read this now since I know it happened to you! I like the fun-loving tone and the mistaken identity. Too bad you can't add sound - I'd have loved to hear the men singing - hee hee.
08/25/08
It took me a second to realize why the organist was mad, but once I did... this was precious. Good work. Blessings, Cheri
08/26/08
I was waiting to find out who the young couple that joined them really was. I expect is is someone they knew and did not recognize as well. Great story.
08/26/08
Oh, Yoko! Breakin' up the church band, huh? This was hilarious...fanastic take on the topic!
Poor Mabel. I'm betting she was embarrassed. This was fun.
08/27/08
What a hilarious story... even funnier knowing it's true!
08/27/08
~Snicker~
08/27/08
Funny. I had to read it twice before I finally figured it out (must be because I'm sleepy and not because of your writing). It's even funnier knowing it's a true story.