The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I had to read this twice to catch why Mabel was mad. I'm sure others will get it quicker than I did:) Good job. Love the story!
Mabel learned a lesson in jumping to conclusions, didn't she? Funny!
I giggle each time I read this now since I know it happened to you! I like the fun-loving tone and the mistaken identity. Too bad you can't add sound - I'd have loved to hear the men singing - hee hee.
It took me a second to realize why the organist was mad, but once I did... this was precious. Good work. Blessings, Cheri
I was waiting to find out who the young couple that joined them really was. I expect is is someone they knew and did not recognize as well. Great story.
Oh, Yoko! Breakin' up the church band, huh? This was hilarious...fanastic take on the topic!
Poor Mabel. I'm betting she was embarrassed. This was fun.
What a hilarious story... even funnier knowing it's true!
Funny. I had to read it twice before I finally figured it out (must be because I'm sleepy and not because of your writing). It's even funnier knowing it's a true story.