The Official Writing Challenge
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SO creative - love this detective work. Your early descriptions are completely wonderful, and I adore the premise of this. Nicely done!
This is wonderful and creative! A very enjoyable read. Good work. Blessings, Cheri
Delightful mystery. Great detective work.
This is a delightful "who done it." The details give real insight into the characters.
Well done Sherlock! And I totally enjoyed the donut crumbs on the officer's lips... I bet you loved throwing that in. This was so much fun to read! Super writing!
Love the name "Rumble." Adds to the already incredible characterization through description and dialogue. This was an incredible approach to the topic. So entertaining, all I needed was some popcorn and soda to go with it. ;)
I love it! I saw it all playing out, but unlike your detective, I didn't discern the truth. A super who-done-it. :) Cat
I love a good 'whodunnit'. Great characterisation :)
Congratulations on your EC, Kristen. Very entertaining!
Very good characterizations in this. I liked the detectives methodology for figuring out who committed the crime. This was a very entertaining read. Congratulations on your placement!
Congratulations on your EC. Very creative story, and great writing. The dialogue and descriptions flowed so well. Nice job with the topic.
Great story, great dialogue, and a thoroughly entertaining whodunnit! Congratulations on your EC win!