The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/08
Cool twist on an old saying, and an very interesting alegory on the Biblical story. Clever idea.
08/22/08
Very unique. I liked this one.
08/25/08
I liked this, one minor error - the predator wants to be downwind from the prey - not upwind. Great writing and good imagination.
God bless.
08/26/08
Good story. Interesting view. Nicely done.