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08/22/08
An interesting set-up, and I appreciate the narrtor's ability to respond to her "red flags."

I had a hard time seeing much of this situation as likely in today's corporate world; parts of it just didn't ring true.

With a bit of tweaking, this would be a chilling look at hypocrisy in a relationship.
08/26/08
Interesting story. Glad she kept questioning his growth. Was he just taking classes or did he belong to a church? Nicely done.