The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Good story. The POV shifts get confusing at times, but the quality still comes through.
08/22/08
Great dialog and flashes from one scene to the next - kept this fast-paced. Found the POV shifts a bit distracting, but otherwise a very engaging piece.
I thought the story was well written and particularly liked the way you showed the Lord's authority over evil Satan's devices.
08/25/08
I enjoyed this, kind of gives me some insight on what may be going on in my patients mind. thanks for sharing.