The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I love this! (So many good entries already this week!) That ending line is a perfect clincher. What an excellent portrayal of the willful blindness of hypocrisy. Well done indeed.
A perfect example of trying to take a splinter out of someone else's eye, while there is a post in your own!
Very powerful writing and very powerful thoughts.
This is incredibly done. You absolutely perfectly portrayed the topic this week, and that last line is absolutely perfect. What a tragic story. Masterful.
"What's good for the gander..." Anyway, this is a perfect example of Christian facade without the inner joy and peace that come from obedience to God. Really good story.

Unfortunately this is a sad commentary on the lives of many Christians. I feel for the young man. Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations on your EC. Very good writing, and an all-too-familiar story. Nice job with the topic.
Didn't see that end coming, though I shouldn't have been surprised. A very well written tale of hypocrisy and the pain it brings. Congratulations on your well deserved EC win!