The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Wow, that's excellent! Wonderful story.
08/21/08
Oh, exceptional dialog - really brought the story along. Loved the characterization. Excellent.
08/22/08
Oh, loved this story and I got chilled, too. Sure sign of greatness:)
08/23/08
SO COOL! Marvelous dialogue...I loved this!
Wonderful story--beginning to end
Your mop woman is the coolest...an angel in disguise?! Every courthouse should have one. Excellent writing, Lynda. Congrats on your EC!
08/28/08
Congratulations on the EC. The dialogue is wonderful. Nice job with the topic.
I love the dialogue and your mop lady's courage in speaking up and showing love to this scared young lawyer. Great writing and a well deserved EC win!
08/29/08
You set the story us so expertly with your opening sentences. Then the "rabbit…keeled over dead" comment was classic. I loved it. The "wouldn't let it go" attitude of the older woman made me smile. I could just see her. :) Then "hypo-whatever" added another smile to this. :) Your ending was gripping.