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08/21/08
A very good take on the topic...TWO charades going on. One by the angel, and one by pretend churches. Good job.
08/21/08
Love this angel! There are so many good lines, but this one sums it up: "Just because it looks like a church, and acts like a church, doesnít mean it is a church!" Very good.
08/21/08
Very creative, and I really like your characterization. Great fit on the topic.
08/22/08
Too true:)
Very creative approach. I loved the idea of being able to see heaven from earth and wondered how my own church would do.
08/27/08
**smile** Well done! I like the gadget under the seat. I wish I had some like that. Your insights are right on target. Good writing.
I wouldn't want to be responsible for making all those tick marks. I'm glad it's an angle's job and not mine. This was fun and a creative take on the topic.
Love your writing and your take on this topic. I hope the device shows brilliant white for most churches, though sometimes it is hard to tell.
08/27/08
I LOVED this! What a unique idea... great job! Blessings, Cheri
08/27/08
What a delightful read with an incredible message. You made it very clear how we can substitute things that seem good for true, authentic fellowship with one another as Christians. Well done!
Excellent message. I loved this!