The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
I felt Samantha's pain as she glanced at the family photo. Thankfully, her faith is strong and she is faithful to her Savior. Hope she doesn't have to pretend too long. Is there a sequel in the works?
08/21/08
Love the title, and Sam's determination to survive "fifteen more minutes."

Toward the middle, this seemed to be more "tell" than "show"--I'd have liked to know Sam better, and to be "under her skin", as it were.

Glad that you resisted the temptation to tie it up all pretty at the end.
08/25/08
Good story but sad. An affair is always more than nothing. God gives her the strength for fifteen minutes at a time. Nicely done.