The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
GREAT voice--love the dialect, and the realistic monologue. My favorite so far at this level.
08/23/08
This struck a chord with me. Excellent writing.
08/25/08
Very well told story. Sees the truth of many churches but also knows the Truth. Good descriptions and realistic dialect.
Nicely done.
08/25/08
I think this is brilliant and right on topic. Well done!
08/25/08
This was a great line: "Well, this is what I want know. I have never heard of ANY emergency room, where people sit around waitin for the doctor pretendin there’s nothin wrong."

This piece was brilliant and poignant. You've hit the nail on the head. I applaud your POV and the lesson it teaches.

Blessings,
Ñheri
08/25/08
Don't know what happened to my keyboard or why my name looks like that on my previous post...

I also wanted to add that I liked the dialect of your MC.

Nice job,
Cheri
09/03/08
A heart-breaking charade that we all play at some level. I like your conclusion "that's what I'll take to the bank, the rest I'm not sure of." This is an excellent illustration for the topic. Excellent writing Dianne! (and thanks :)