The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Oh, this is good and right on topic. The fluid flow and meter are A+ as is the story itself. I hope this places high.
08/21/08
Excellent fable/parable!
08/22/08
A great poetic version of "The Good Samaritan."
08/23/08
This is really good! I don't usually care much for poetry, but this was very cool. The last stanza is perfect. I think this needs to win. :-)
08/24/08
Excellent job! Rhyme anf flow were very well done. This should place high.
08/25/08
Very well done!! I love how you used the pigeon and the peacock to act out the story. A great lesson - I wonder how many people react like the peacock in today's church!
08/28/08
Congratulations, Donna, on an excellent piece. You portrayed "charade" in a very realistic way, so sad. Keep up the great work and God bless.