The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Perfect application of this week's topic!

The first half of this read like fiction, the second half like non-fiction. Either would work, but it should probably be consistent.

Glad that the narrator was so discerning!
08/26/08
Very good story. The MC thankfully knew the truth brefore going to that church and knew what to look for. Nicely done.