The Official Writing Challenge
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Very unique descriptive writing on topic. And it sent me to read the Bible reference.
08/18/08
Am I reading in the "cleanliness is next go Godliness" theme in here? Interesting point of view here because you've used great detail. I like how Youngun has to be mentored, adding another dimension to, uh, dirt.
08/19/08
Very entertaining! Although most people generally don't have amoebas on their hands....nevertheless it works well for the story. A well-crafted story.
This was a very creative concept for this week's topic. At first I didn't know what was going on, but you quickly pulled me into the story and I began to understand what was happening.

I'm really surprised that you aren't in masters right now. With a few more entries like this, I'm sure you will be. Awesome job!
08/20/08
The germs go marching two by two... harrah, harrah.

Definately unique POV. I was actually rooting for the germs to make it.
Very original. I can honestly say I would NEVER have thought of "germ warfare" for this topic. Truly creative.
08/20/08
Gulp. Okay....I think I've got to go wash my hands now...just in case! Very good descriptions...extremely vivid and I even though I wanted the MC's to succeed...I didn't want the germs to win! Lol! Excellent writing! ^_^
Hi James..reference Uk faithwriters, there are two of us from my Church on the Isle of Wight, Patricia Todd and myself.
Interested in your creative arts possibilitites; My emphasis is on poetry with spiritual themes
and a few articles/ testimonies.