The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this story, so light and airy. I can relate to "Aunt Bessie", as well as, the giggling nieces. Thanks for adding a smile to my day.
08/18/08
A very well written piece and an interesting read. You have successfully captured the minds of your readers in thinking along with the two cousins in anticipation, expecting the unexpected from Aunt Bessie.
08/20/08
ROFL! What a hilarious habit! This is just the laugh I need today. I loved the character of Aunt Bessie! Such fun and especially going with these two as they find all these wonderful treasures. Great job! ^_^