The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/08
Smart dog! Good dialogue.
Cute story! our dog Rebel used to play hide and seek with us, too.
08/17/08
I always enjoy your honest writings. Your voice is always a pleasure to read. I enjoyed this, Chrissy. God bless.
This is another one I need to read to my kids. Precious. I can picture the illustrations in my mind.
This is just precious, Chrissy. I love the "supporting role" the dog played. Well done.
08/18/08
I like the story very much. It's so well expressed, heart warming, and vividly described.
08/20/08
Cute story. I love animal stories, and this one about a dog and an little girl tickled my fancy....Helen
08/20/08
Oooh! So cute! I liked Tina and how she did find the watch, thanks to Cindy. My only note was at one point, you began 3 sentences right after the other...each starting with "Tina". ^_^ Otherwise, a fun read! Those two make a good pair!
Cute story. :) All I can say is that Tina was LUCKY she had Cindy! (actually, I think ANY child is lucky to have a dog :)
08/20/08
A lovely story with personable characters (including Cindy!). Smart doggy :)