The Official Writing Challenge
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I think I got the main idea of this, but I did get a little lost, especially in the second half. Clever idea.
What an interesting creative concept. The Older Vincent is talking to the younger Vincent as he's dying from a stab wond. Very original. Nice job!
08/16/08
Very out-of-the-box :) Intense, with a great voice. Super descriptions especially.