The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
Hard to write through the tears. I believe this entry was written just for me. Beautiful and well done. I would love to see music put to your song. Awesome work!
08/16/08
This blessed me today. You do a great job showing how angels help to keep us from the enemy's tactic--self-centeredness. This has a gilded quality to it. The only thing I'm not sure about is why so much of this is in italics.
This is beautifully written, with an important message. Thanks for the reminder to remember those little "hidden" blessings in life. Well done.
08/18/08
What a sweet story you've woven together here. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing Joy and Zoe with us.
08/19/08
This is wonderfully done, Marita. Your characterization and emotion are beautifully done. I'd probably find some other way to show the differences in speakers than the italics - it was a touch distracting. Otherwise, very, very good.
08/20/08
Oh my! This is truly wonderful! Gave me goosebumps and I was so rooting that Zoe would help Joy find her joy! Good twist at the end with Joy being a pastor's wife, this is a favorite of mine this week! I loved it! ^_^
Clever and well-written once again, Marita. You are such a creative person.
08/20/08
I thought the poem at the end was excellent. This whole story is lovely and calming. Ahhh! Thanks. (only a coffee drinker would find God's voice in a latte) ;-D
Thank you too for the gift. As someone else said, it seemed written just for me. Excellent job with the interplay between the Zoe and Joy. The song at the end was a special treat!
Loved this and great writing. Congratulations on your win!
08/21/08
Congratulations, Mari, on placing so high! Wow! I loved this entry and it ministered to me so much. So very proud of your writing accomplishments!
Laury