The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/08
Nice piece. Kept me hanging on until the end.Hiding to survive is the ultimate hide and seek.It is also the ultimate rush.Well done.
08/20/08
Wow! Lots of suspense in here and definitely the ultimate hide and seek. I liked the slight Robinson Crusoe touch of finding the stream and using the fronds to help with camoflauge. This was a suspense-filled read. Nicely done! ^_^
08/20/08
Good writing and suspenseful. Not sure if this was during the Korean War or modern times - no Apache helicopters during the Korean War. It's hard to lose a SAM, except to fly right at them at top speed, doing rolls. Can't outrun them.
Otherwise, well done. God bless and keep writing.
Wow! Loved this adventure packed story. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
08/21/08
Good job! Lots of action and drama kept me interested in this story from start to finish. So glad it had a happy ending. God certainly is our refuge!