The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
Awwwww. I especially loved the ending to this cute love story. This story made me smile and sigh a happy sigh.
08/16/08
Great story.
08/16/08
Delightful story. Very well done!
08/16/08
Cute and clever - delightful end to the story especially, and a bang-up job of characterization.
08/19/08
What an adorable story! I really enjoyed it and I am glad there is a happy ending.
08/21/08
I loved your story, beginning to end. The conversational tone is just right.
08/21/08
I LOVE the ending, this was precious! Well done and congrats!
08/21/08
Wonderful, fun, satisfying, entertaining.. story.. all the way through.. CONGRATS.. great take on the subject.. and I LOVED the word play and the humorous references to caffeine!
08/21/08
What a fun read! Congratulations on your EC!
08/21/08
This was so clever and fun...well done! Congratulations!
08/23/08
Well crafted and flat out funny - nice job. Some very clever lines, I think my favorite is: "Both of us have naïve meters that register over in the dangerous level." Congratulations on the EC!