The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/08
This is beautifully constructed and absolutely breathtaking and poignant. Just fabulous. I was completely engrossed.
08/16/08
This is so well done, and very effective.
Awesome job with this one! I was wondering if there would be entries about the Fall of man, and your poem depicted it with such skillful precision.

I hope this one does well, because it is very good.
Beautifully written and one of my favorites this week.
This is a poetic masterpiece of a prayer for all of us! Wonderful job! Thanks!
You have a strong message beautifully and wonderfully presented. Congratulatins on a well-deserved placement.
Excellent use of the topic! This is an inspiring reminder - great job, and congratulations on your placement!
As I said before, just beautiful and congratulations on your well deserved win!
Beautifully written! Congratulations on your win, this was fantastic!
08/21/08
Congrats on your 3rd place in EC! I loved the poem... the darkness contrasted with the light... great masterful writing..!
08/21/08
Precisely to the topic--and a wonderful entry. You packed a powerful punch with this one. Congratulations on your EC 3rd placement.
Simple and elegant. I love this poem. Congratulations on your EC!
08/21/08
Simply gorgeous. Congratulations!
08/23/08
As a man I seldom use the word "beautiful", but it is all I know to describe this poem. Great voice, great rhythm, and GREAT MESSAGE! Congratulations on your EC!
08/26/08
Such a beautiful poem with a perfect rhythm. Each word is placed just so and it is haunting. Congratulations. You deserved it!
Really moving and meaningful. Thank you.