The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! You know how to reel your reader in. Great MC voice. I was hanging on every word.
08/15/08
He is odd...and not just odd, creepy and scary and a few other things too, lol! Good job with atmosphere and pulling the readers straight in. Oooh, I wanna know what happens (mainly, how she 'gets away') ^_^