The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
I like the balance of this piece. The MC honors God by seeking a Godly wife and yet also honors God by not shaming, ignoring, or judging the undesirable, unbelieving woman. This kept my interest throughout. I was satisfied by the ending.
08/15/08
You had a good ending and especially a strong MC. I liked that he prayed for both of them and how he didn't judge by appearance for the last one, the artist. Interesting, I am curious to know what happens next. ^_^