The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job of getting into Eve's mind. I enjoyed your rendition of the Bible story.
08/16/08
I like this account from Eve's point of you. Nicely done. I especially like how you tied in the game. Good job!
08/18/08
Interesting read from Eve's POV! Great work on the key point to the message of hide and seek as the reminder that we have a fair and all knowing God.