The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job of getting into Eve's mind. I enjoyed your rendition of the Bible story.
I like this account from Eve's point of you. Nicely done. I especially like how you tied in the game. Good job!
Interesting read from Eve's POV! Great work on the key point to the message of hide and seek as the reminder that we have a fair and all knowing God.