The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/08
Very clever and important story!! Praise God for all those He sends as missionaries to China. This writing itself is missionary work, reminding Americans of the great need for Bibles in certain countries. Excellent!!
08/14/08
OOPS!! Forgive me!! I forget that Faithwriers is global. Many continents are blessed to be able to read the Bible in the open.
Your heart-breaking story shows very well the terrible way children are being used unknowingly to spy on their parents. It reminds us how blessed we are to live in a country of religious freedom. May it ever be so.
08/16/08
Chilling--because this type of event takes place in many countries. I like that your succinct writing tells the story very well without being overdramatic or talking down to the reader by overexplaining. Well done.
08/20/08
Excellent (and sad) story for the topic. Great work on this.
Excellent storytelling. You captured the innocence of the girl, and yet conveyed the sinister scheme. A very timely piece.