The Official Writing Challenge
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What an unusual story!
The controlling husband stirred up my "righteous indignation." I was hoping this was fiction. You did a good job of engaging the reader's interest.
08/16/08
Oh wow. Very engaging and disturbing. I was absolutely engaged from beginning to end.
08/16/08
wow... I was expecting a different ending, maybe a case of Ahzheimers or amenesia. Unbelievable!
08/16/08
I now have goosebumps. Am praying for you.
Laury
08/16/08
I now have goosebumps. Am praying for you.
Laury