The Official Writing Challenge
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You provided a real contrast in the sometimes-presence of your earthly father and the always-presence of your heavenly Father. Your fruits were a great tie-in for your memories, and I liked your witness to the goodness of your husband.
08/14/08
"The five of us stood in a half moon, seeking answers" is one example of great imagery in this. I like how you follow up a paragraph about time spent with the children with one showing absence. Thoughtfully written. The theme highlights an important truth.