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The suspense in your sci-fi story kept me riveted. I was glad the missionary got away.
oooh, a seven foot hunter with talons and a rifle. Not the sort of person you want to meet in the dark. Okay, not the sort of person you want to meet anywhere.

I'm glad The Missionary got away to continue his rescue of the humans. Great story full of suspense. Well done Mick.
Very well-written, obviously, a very comfortable genre for you. Clarity in descriptions and action. :)
Loved the action and suspense. Excellent ending, too.