The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
Wow! This gives new meaning to "burning your bridges behind you." And that last line is incredible. Well done.
08/09/08
Powerful, well-presented allegory. I was engaged throughout, and love that last line especially.
08/11/08
I love a detailed story that ministers to me on several levels. This is a keeper. Great job. God bless.
08/11/08
Amazing imagery and lesson. Excellent writing. Amazing.
Forgiveness is such an important part of being a Christian, and your story makes that very clear.

I like how at the end, she talks about the weight of the matchbox being lifted and making it easier to cross.

This blessed me. Thank you for sharing it.
08/13/08
Wow. Heavy matches. Wouldn't life be wonderful if we could all just throw away our box of matches?

Marvelously well written entry. I would have loved to see your description of the matchbox falling out of sight to the bottom of the gorge, lost forever in the rocks below.
08/14/08
I loved this story. I think maybe it hit home ya know :) I think you did a great job on it.
08/14/08
A very good take on the topic.