The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/08
This was great. I know how hard it to is to write a poem trying to tell a story AND make it rhyme and this was done excellently. Thanks for sharing!
I loved the analogy of the construction of a bridge to Christ on the cross. The way and only way to cross over troubled waters of the abyss into life!
08/11/08
Excellent job with this poem. Gives the Gospel as well. Good rhyming. Nicely done. Thanks.