The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/08
Great, natural rhyme to this piece, and the meter felt just right too. I was, of course, most compelled by the message. That last stanza really got me.
08/14/08
Fascinating story-poem; my first thought was you were going to describe the spark that ignited the Reformation. But, even when it was clearly something else, I had to read to the end, anyway.

Thank you for leaving a comment on my bridge poem, too. I appreciate it!
08/14/08
Very visually written, and it draws the reader along. Great job!