The Official Writing Challenge
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What an incredible way to describe that first sin. Wow! Excellent writing.
Reading this piece is like hearing a haunting melody that can never be forgotten. Gloriously original, dripping with pathos, yet singing with hope. I'm hooked!

Marvelous, MARVELOUS analogy, masterfully presented. Wow.
Your bittersweet version of this story is extraordinarily creative.
This is a wonderful entry! I so hope you place high with this one. I was hooked from the very beginning. You are indeed a master in your writing skills, my friend. Kudos!
Terrific suspense and a masterful and fresh retelling of the Fall. Wow.
Wow.. I didn't realize it was Adam and Eve at first... when I did, it was overwhelming. This is a powerful allegory.
Wow! This was masterfully done! Excellent reading.
Incredibly creative and imaginative. I loved the last line, especially.
Why would He, indeed? But He did!