The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
What an incredible way to describe that first sin. Wow! Excellent writing.
Reading this piece is like hearing a haunting melody that can never be forgotten. Gloriously original, dripping with pathos, yet singing with hope. I'm hooked!

08/09/08
Marvelous, MARVELOUS analogy, masterfully presented. Wow.
Your bittersweet version of this story is extraordinarily creative.
This is a wonderful entry! I so hope you place high with this one. I was hooked from the very beginning. You are indeed a master in your writing skills, my friend. Kudos!
08/12/08
Terrific suspense and a masterful and fresh retelling of the Fall. Wow.
08/12/08
Wow.. I didn't realize it was Adam and Eve at first... when I did, it was overwhelming. This is a powerful allegory.
Wow! This was masterfully done! Excellent reading.
08/14/08
Incredibly creative and imaginative. I loved the last line, especially.
Why would He, indeed? But He did!