The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a superb poem from the rhyme down to the perfect meter. The message was clear and forceful and I could almost hear it being read in church or in front of a large gathering. I very much hope this entry earns the top placement it richly deserves.
Wow! How powerful! I admire your talent for writing poetry. The topic was carried through without fail. Strong flow, pattern, rhythm, meter, rhyme - everything, but especially the MESSAGE. Absolutely beautiful. :)
08/10/08
Excellent! Love the rhyme and the rhythm kept it going.
This is a good witness to the lost. Great job!
This was so well done that I saw it unfold before my eyes as I read it. Thanks!
I enjoyed this poem so much, I went back and read it aloud. Wonderful message!
Wow! This poem is amazing. Wonderful rhyme, perfect meter and an incredible message. I sometimes stumble when reading poetry, but this just flowed.
This is beautiful. All the way through, my heart took on the journey with you.
08/14/08
This is so, SO powerful and excellent. What an incredible piece with an incredible message. So glad I got a chance to read this.
Helen, this is wonderful poetry.I love it, and what a message. God Bless you my friend. Elizabeth.
08/19/08
Oh Helen, this is a beautiful poem from start to finish!! I see that many people agree with me. It is a winner in my estimation! Good job! Thanks be to God for helping a countless number of saints find that narrow path. Linda
08/14/09
A vision everyone should be given. Loved the way this flowed.
Lisa