The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
This could use some spacing between the paragraphs. The story is good. My only question is how someone who is good at heart can have a mean streak that people remember him for?
08/08/08
Good descriptions - would love to see more.
08/14/08
The dialogue is excellent and the brothers are very believable. The direction of the story was surprising, too. I hadn't seen it coming. Good job.