The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
This is a sweet story. Grandchildren need to learn more about their grandparents' stories. Very nicely done. Thanks.
08/10/08
I loved these two characters and your title is the best! Great writing. I want to meet dear old Dot!
Laury
08/11/08
So many elderly people take on a sweet childlike way. You've captured this nicely in Dot. You've also captured what it means to honor our elders. The ending is winkishly cute. ;)
08/12/08
I had a feeling this was yours when I read it last week Marita. You write with poignancy and feeling. I want to read a whole book of these characters... so... get going on it!LOL... I want an autographed copy!
08/12/08
**smile** What a great gift they gave each other! This left me with such a warm fuzzy feeling. Thanks
I like Dot. She sure is a feisty old woman that's for sure. Lots of spunk and energy. This was a fun story to read, and it's cool that you brought back a character.
You did such a wonderful job of showing the love between these two. What a cute story and great writing!
This indeed is a winner in my eyes. This was so delightful to read. Once again, your entry did not disappoint. Love your writing.
You've made a hero out of Dot. What a gal. What a great entry!!! Big time kudos!!