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07/11/05
A little predictable, and the two gerunds in the first paragraph bothered me, but otherwise a delightful and meaningful story. I am sure it will touch many who read it. Thank you for posting.
07/11/05
A nice glimpse into a life, and possibly an angel visit? :)
07/11/05
Good job! It seems to me that the book symbolizes marriage. Very clever!
07/11/05
This is often true to life. A well written story in which to reflect on.
God bless, littlelight
07/14/05
Interesting! Tammy ... or Heather? As a non-lover-of-shopping, I couldn't believe the husband felt so bad for not going shopping! But I was glad to see the happy ending. The double meanings of many of your lines were interesting too.
This tweaked my heart; made me think about how it feels to be influenced and even swayed, and yet how God steps in to rescue us from regretful, emotional decisions. :-)
07/15/05
Hmmmm, interesting read. Nice situation. Maybe could use a touch more polishing. But a great message.