The Official Writing Challenge
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A nice, vividly told parable. You did a great job with your imagery and alliteration. :-)
08/09/08
Your title is very creative. I like your use of alliteration in this, "Music meandered merrily, damsels danced deliriously." Your word choices and phrases are excellent, "a thunderous clap and a flash of feral fire impaled the night." I love the ending of this beautiful allegory. Your are an extremely skilled writer!
08/12/08
I liked this parable. I had to think about some of the words, you either have a great thesaurus or a very large vocabulary. Well Done!