The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
The last two lines are priceless. Good story.
08/07/08
Enjoyed this - I could feel the desperation, and loved the end. Well done!
I enjoyed this creative take on the topic. It is also a great reminder to not be impatient about God's plans for us.
Your story shows wonderfully how God uses those who are open to His calling. I loved the ending.