The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/08
I was captivated with your story. Your method of telling this was very effective (starting with being a nurse, then telling the story behind how you became a nurse and not being satisfied with the work. Part of me hopes this is a true story. You've written this very well.
08/10/08
I so love the image of the golden bridge and the peaceful way Mr. Johnson said goodbye. What a great story and a wonderful lesson at the end! Excellent writing!
08/14/08
"The bridge between us is the love of God in our hearts for one another," This summarises the real bridge story. But isn't it great that we have a golden bridge ahead of us? A lovely parallel of stories.