The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your unique take on the topic, though I admit bias, having been involved in Cub Scouts for many years when our kids were younger.
08/08/08
I really like how you approached your story, starting with the banquet, then going back to fill in details on Jake. This sounds like a true story. I like that the "fortune fish slipped powerlessly to the floor." (excellent wisdom in that). You've written this very well.
08/09/08
This piece has a seamless, conversational flow to it. Very well written, entertaining, and spiritually uplifting.
This was a delight to read, and it really inspired me. I am assuming that it is a true story, and what a powerful testimony it is! Thank you so much for sharing this.