The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the "fantasy" fairy-tale quality of this. Your title is very good, providing curiosity and images to your reader. I enjoyed the word names and meanings and how they fit perfectly with your story. Your imagination is amazing.
Fun story! I'd love to read more.
Nice to see an imaginative fantasy take on this week's topic. I enjoyed your characters and their meaningful names. Of course, I'd like to know more about what happens after this story ends. Does the bridge get rebuilt?

Good writing!
I love it! I like the fantasy elements and the imagery--I can picture this very well. You should make this a short story so we know what happens next!