The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/08
I had to smile at your phrases, "some long forgotten architectural accident" and "as much majesty as a junked car." :) I totally enjoyed your humor! Your message at the end was perfect.
08/09/08
Such a well defined and discriptive view of a bridge -and depicted in such a way that one can almost see, feel and touch this scenic bridge that is obviously an "eye sore" and not exactly one of the 7 wonders of the world. Nicely done, and an enjoyable read with an obvious point well taken. Good job.
You took something as simple and boring as an ugly bridge and you turned it into a very meaningful piece. I enjoyed your descriptions of the bridge and also the lesson being taught. An enjoyable read.