The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
Keep up the great work. I'm enjoying the ride :)
07/11/05
Good story, hope to see more.
07/11/05
This was a good commentary, how we certainly find lessons in life in the most unusual of circumstances. Great story. littlelight
07/12/05
Neat story. Characters well drawn and believable. Good dense of place. Hope there's more where that one came from.
07/12/05
Err.. make that sense of place.
07/13/05
Your first paragraph especially has some good phrases there. Looking forward to finding out how the main characters comes to peace with life.
Your shifts of topic/emphasis kept me on my toes and wondering what was next! I could picture the old geezer and wanted to give him a hug.....
07/15/05
captured an effective mood. congrats!