The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/08
I liked this, "I suddenly realized that I was putting my trust into the hands of someone I have never met…I couldn't even see his face too well." Your parallel to life and the message that the bridge was a cross was very good.
08/09/08
I loved the symbolism in this piece. I also loved the tension and suspense that you built up until the very end.

Great job with this!
08/13/08
Wow... great suspense and description and a very satisfying ending! Nice!
08/17/08
Oh, so creative! Love the use of the cross, and that last line is just great. Nicely done.