The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/08
It was a little hard to follow the ins and outs of this piece, I could understand that he'd been through a horrible, harrowing experience, but did make it through by God's grace. I love that he was dancing around the shop at the end, it was good, just remember to add extra spaces next time for easier reading. Thanks for sharing! ^_^
What terrible events mar our world's history. I could almost hear the old man telling the story of the horrors to his granddaughter.