The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/08
I like this poem. Full of great descriptions. Wonderful job!
08/03/08
I love your imagaes is this, especially the "rainbow" and "kissing the hills." Beautiful work.
08/04/08
What gorgeous imagery here...I could see and smell every phrase. Lovely.
08/05/08
Beautiful imagery! You'll love the nature here in the Northwest. :-)
08/05/08
The images are just gorgeous in this piece. Descriptions are excellent and SO vivid. VERY nicely done!
08/05/08
Absolutely beautiful poetry for imagery and sound and meaning.
08/06/08
Peaceful (I needed this) and beautiful images. Ahhh. I like "trailing shadows chase the thinning haze"
08/06/08
Beautiful ! Great use of sound. The 's' sound throughout made the reader feel the soft feel of the day.
Well done!
08/06/08
Wonderful descriptive writing - as if written with a paint brush in lieu of a pen.
08/06/08
Beautiful! I loved every last word!
08/18/08
Beautiful images in this poem. Could you please point me in the direction of this place? ;-)